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From Pressure to Progress- Assessing the Impact of Taiwan's 108 Curriculum on Teen Mental Health
            their time to pursue a large number of extracurricular activities for the archive. Consequently, with
            the examination remaining consistent, the ‘learning archive’ only increased difficulty for college
            applications and added more stress for students, who believe achieving so much is too much to ask
            for. What’s more, the change in the syllabus has also disrupted students’ learning habits.

                    Even  though  the  contents  were  reduced  massively,  the  way  classes  are  taught  and  the
            contents  of  each  subject  have  become,  to  students,  extremely  difficult  and  messy  for  them  to
            comprehend.  Specifically,  especially  for  those  being  the  first  group  of  students  learning  in  this
            curriculum, they found it difficult to adapt to the altered version content in class. This results in a
            sense of insecurity and panic as students not only need to deal with the stress for college exams but
            also ways to adapt to the new syllabus. Some concluded that the root of stress is the mindset in
            Taiwan and the stereotype of attending college, which is ‘university is the basic key for a successful
            life’. Ultimately, students believe that though the new curriculum changed a number of things, as
            long as the mindset and atmosphere regarding going to college is not changed, academic stress and
            depression trends will not be alleviated.

            V. Conclusion and Suggestions

                 (I) Recommendation

                 In  light  of  the  research  findings,  it  is  imperative  for  the  Taiwanese  government  and  the
            Ministry of Education to undertake strategic methods to create a better learning environment for
            Taiwanese students. The team’s recommendations are as follows:
                1.  Firstly,  most  importantly,  there  needs  to  be  a  promotion  to  advocate  for  a  holistic
                    understanding  of  success  beyond  academic  achievements.  This  includes  a  campaign  and
                    trend aiming to change the fixed-mindset of all Taiwanese to create a supportive, healthy
                    environment that prioritizes mental health especially for teenage students. By implementing
                    the  changes  to  the  curriculum,  the  government  and  MOE  will  be  creating  a  salutary
                    condition for students to learn, grow, thrive in, thus advocating for competence and literacy.
                2.  Next, according to the self-conducted survey, e-learning portfolio contributes largely for the
                    exacerbated depression trends.  To address  the  issue, the MOE should  consider  clarifying
                    and  streamlining  the  portfolio  requirements  as  well  as  reducing  the  complexity  of  the
                    portfolio. As a majority of students claim the portfolio as too vague and difficult to follow.
                3.  The curriculum should incorporate a periodic curriculum review for students, teachers, as
                    well as parents to reflect and provide feedback upon the educational system every year. The
                    review ensures that the curriculum is up to students’ needs and considers students concerns
                    regarding their learning environment.

                 (II) Conclusion

                    Perceivable from the team’s comprehensive survey, the essay delved into the efficiency of
            the newly established 108 curriculum. The survey findings revealed that students not only believe
            the  new  curriculum  has  not  helped  them  in  academic  and  high  school  achievements,  it  also
            exacerbated their academic stress in terms of college preparation. Notably, numerous respondents
            expressed dissatisfaction and concern regarding the increased stress due to the e-learning portfolio,
            alongside  the  persisting  emphasis  on  examination  scores  in  university  admissions.  The  findings
            highlight the cruciality for the MOE to relate to the students’ perspectives as well as to reflect on
            ways  to  improve  students’  learning  environment,  ensuring  the  curriculum  not  only  reduces
            Taiwanese students’ academic pressure but also adequately prepares students for future challenges.
            Ultimately, while the 108 curriculum represents a major leap forward in the educational revolution
            alongside with the world, the essay and survey findings highlight critical areas needing attention.


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